Proof · 2 min read
A complaint you fixed can be a note
Write as if the reader is busy. A complaint you fixed can be a note. Center it on a problem you repaired.
Work in this order: say the problem and the repair in one sentence. Read it aloud once. If you run out of breath before the point, move the point up.
The cut
Delete a story that skips the problem when you see it. Specific and plain beats a bigger adjective.
It is ready when the sentence includes both. Then stop editing.
File the page under "Proof". Keep one offer in view. A second offer can have its own note.
A writing note. It does not promise reach, rank, or sales.